On the 21st of November all of gold house went down to the Aquatics for a free fun swim. Gold house was aloud to go there for free because we fundraised the most food cans and foods of packets.
When we got down there we were all excited and it was a scorching hot day, so we all needed a swim. When we got to the pool, we were so anxious to get into the pool and when we were aloud to hop in we all rushed to the pool as fast as we could and splashed into the water. All day we got to do whatever we wanted we could of gone in and out of the pool as we pleased, we could go inside and by some food from the vending machines and we could play on the playground as well.
At 12.30 we had our own little prize giving just for gold house. In our class there were lots of people that got certificates and a few people got badges. At the end of the day we were all exhausted from our fun day, but on the bad side was that we got a little to much sunburn.
About Me
- Tiria
- I am very wierd at times and I like having fun with my friends and I love Kittens and Koalas.
3 comments:
Hi, your recount is so cool! I love how you used alot of descriptive language in this story.
The only thing i would do to improve this recount is to maybe have a little bit more writing in this recount to make it more better. But apart from that i think your recount is one of the best recounts ive read.
Hi Tiria, I really Like your story and how you used heaps of descriptive words. All I thik you could do to improve your story is maybe to write a little bit more. But overall your story is great!!!
Hey T
aloud is spelt differently because there are 2 different meanings so maybe you should look up the other meaning.
*Tiggi
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