Hi this is a recount about what happened in my holidays. On the 3rd of October I went to my friend’s birthday party. For her birthday we went to Rainbows End in Auckland. The people that came were Sydnee, Sophie and I. My friends name was Kathy. Brian Kathy's dad picked all of us up and we headed off to Auckland.
When we got to Auckland the first thing we did was go to Rainbows End of course, and we went to go get our tickets. The first thing that we did when we got to rainbows end was go on the dodgems. Dodgems are little cars that have a little bumper thing around the bottom edge. The dodgems were really really fun because we were just crashing into each other. The next thing we went on was called the Log Ride or whatever it’s called, and that was really awesome. Then we headed of to the fear fall and that was so so so so so so so so so freaky. After that we went to the SpongeBob Square Pants 3D movie, then we went to the Gold Rush, then we went to the bumper boats. Near the end I went onto the roller coaster that was my favourite ride because it went upside down and that was freaky and I got to do it twice. At the end we went to the pirate ship that was really cool.
After a long day we went to Matamata and had Mac Donald’s for dinner and that was yummy. And when I got home I wanted to go there and do it all again because it was so so so so so fun.
FIN
When we got to Auckland the first thing we did was go to Rainbows End of course, and we went to go get our tickets. The first thing that we did when we got to rainbows end was go on the dodgems. Dodgems are little cars that have a little bumper thing around the bottom edge. The dodgems were really really fun because we were just crashing into each other. The next thing we went on was called the Log Ride or whatever it’s called, and that was really awesome. Then we headed of to the fear fall and that was so so so so so so so so so freaky. After that we went to the SpongeBob Square Pants 3D movie, then we went to the Gold Rush, then we went to the bumper boats. Near the end I went onto the roller coaster that was my favourite ride because it went upside down and that was freaky and I got to do it twice. At the end we went to the pirate ship that was really cool.
After a long day we went to Matamata and had Mac Donald’s for dinner and that was yummy. And when I got home I wanted to go there and do it all again because it was so so so so so fun.
FIN
3 comments:
heeps of writing keep up the good work.
P.S when you wrote a comment to me you wrote firt insted of first.
i only found at least 1 spelling mistake, keep up the good work
Hey tiria loving the recount its got a lot of detail and like samiie said there was only about one spelling mistake, and thats about it keep up the good work!
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